So is over-writing. So is under-emoting. So is telling, rather than showing. I've been deep in re-writes for weeks, and I keep shocking myself with all the times I've broken these rules.
On the plus-side, MINDER's awesome now. Read the new-and-improved first chapters here:
Another plus, I finally got www.Ganzfield.com. Someone had been trying to sell it for years, since it's so close to the name "Ganzfeld."
So, my plans of world domination continue to move forward. World domination - woo hoo!